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Reviews For: Claustrophobic in the Dark

lockna2
2007-02-03
ch 1,
this is ok but u should hav put a bit more thourt into word place ment just read thou this poem (aloud ) and u will se wat i mean
saynt's avocate
2005-10-29
ch 1,
Hey! great one. I like! You know what, I'm queit too, and stuff like that, lol. did you get my email? if not say so plz... *giggle* anyway, great poem. you have a nice site too, i checked..
Stylo
2005-08-18
ch 1,
Claustraphobic in the dark, indeed. In the dark, you don't know who's around and where to trun to. Plus, ever since I listened to Iron Maiden's "Fear of the Dark" and the amazing laughter ;;shivers;; I've felt like you do in your poem.I hate it when the power goes off in school hours. I mean, the teachers still keep droning on. Pah. Damn them.*kaleidoscope-vision192
My Judas
2005-07-07
ch 1,
Dark, dark, dark, krad. I really like this...
Lynnie-Pooh
2005-06-23
ch 1,
Awsome. Loved it like everything else you write. Keep it up.

-Lyn-
Hateful-Fury
2005-06-17
ch 1,
I knw what you mean.. Im more afraid of the cold than dark.. very nice poems.. keep up the amazing work... you are truly talented..

luv,fury..
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