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| lockna2 2007-02-03 ch 1, | this is ok but u should hav put a bit more thourt into word place ment just read thou this poem (aloud ) and u will se wat i mean |
| saynt's avocate 2005-10-29 ch 1, | Hey! great one. I like! You know what, I'm queit too, and stuff like that, lol. did you get my email? if not say so plz... *giggle* anyway, great poem. you have a nice site too, i checked.. |
| Stylo 2005-08-18 ch 1, | Claustraphobic in the dark, indeed. In the dark, you don't know who's around and where to trun to. Plus, ever since I listened to Iron Maiden's "Fear of the Dark" and the amazing laughter ;;shivers;; I've felt like you do in your poem.I hate it when the power goes off in school hours. I mean, the teachers still keep droning on. Pah. Damn them.*kaleidoscope-vision192 |
| My Judas 2005-07-07 ch 1, | Dark, dark, dark, krad. I really like this... |
| Lynnie-Pooh 2005-06-23 ch 1, | Awsome. Loved it like everything else you write. Keep it up. -Lyn- |
| Hateful-Fury 2005-06-17 ch 1, | I knw what you mean.. Im more afraid of the cold than dark.. very nice poems.. keep up the amazing work... you are truly talented.. luv,fury.. |