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| crazeedaizee411 2008-05-13 ch 1, | abuseAmen. |
| xoxbecausexox 2008-04-25 ch 1, | abuseLets work backwards through your supposed essay. I hate to tell you this, honey, but your dear president's tax cuts helped nothing. We are still headed into a recession, meaning more debt. During 9/11 Bush did not react nearly as quickly as he should of, and he and his fellow politicians failed to recognise the harmful powders that literally caked the city for blocks, and the effects of such are causing cancerous diseases of residents' lungs. Also, although I do not in any way condone what had occured in Iraq under Saddam Hussien, at least children could walk the streets without being murdered. Women also had a much safer standing in society, and the deaths of civilians in this war per year have outnumbered the deaths of civilians in any year under this truly awful dictator. Lastly, I would like to point out that any 'weapons of mass destruction' that were found in Iraq were obscolete (I'm sorry, I'm a horrible speller who won't waster her time looking that up for the likes of you) and therefore would not be used on the U.S. or any other country because of logic. If ours our better, and they bomb someone with their rickety crap, they'll be blown off the map. It's sad, true, and stated simply so your ignorant mind can digest it. |
| Theatre des Vampires 2006-03-02 ch 1, | abuseWell, brainwashed are we? I. Saddam Hussein had nothing to do with the 9/11 bombingsII. No US citizens have ever been killed by people under Saddam's swayI. Saddam was a sick man, but what we've given iraq is not vastly better than what they had under Saddam, insurgency and chaos have ensured that.IV. Its Osama, not OsameV. Tax cuts put us in huge deficit, just like Reagan's, they definitely didn't save us from debtVI. Bush has a low IQ, he ceratainly doesn't deserve even you're praiseVII. For every terrorist we kill, seven will stand up in his place.VI. Saddam had no WMDs, unless road-side bombs cause mass-destruction...X. In conclusion, you are even more misinformed than our president ~Theatre des Vampires |
| homelessromantic 2006-01-07 ch 1, anon. | abuseYes, Bush is a talented mother-** monkey, isn't he? For your information, we killed over six thousand people in the war. Did you know that there are plenty of other terribly evil men that America are friends with, just so we can get their trade or their oil. The tax cuts only help rich people, and they cut down on the important things they fund. Many people are indebt because of Bush, the stupid **. We'll all praise president Bush when he's nolonger president. I read your other entry too, and you have everything way out of whack. Burn in hell, conservative. |
| another random guy 2005-10-30 ch 1, | abusegod, these liberals hate Bush. Look, if you want to make people think that Bush is a good president, then give us reasons and don't post stuff that obviously isn't true |
| Caecandy 2005-10-08 ch 1, | abuseHello. This is Satire? Correct? I'm almost certain, but just in case. If this isn't satire... You're an idiot, plain and simple. I COULD insult you and give calculated reasons, but this is most likely satire and mean't to ** me off. If this is satire, and I'm corect, good for you. You managed to anger a good few librals who sent in long reviews at which I will read. Cae |
| . 2005-10-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseYou are a really sadistic person. I've come up with three theories here: 1. You are just trying to get popele riled up. Psych experiment anyone. 2. You are so intensely desperate for reviews and attention. 3. You are the dumbest, stupidest, most ignorant, uninformed, biased jaskass I have ever 'met.' |
| god 2005-08-21 ch 1, anon. | abusewhat an insolent fool. im not a liberal, but even I disagree with this **. and I should have known a brainwashed fool like you would go off wanting to suck W's **. realisticly, bush is hardly doing anything in afganistan & iraq. did you know that when he went in afganistan, he had less soldiers than police in manhattan? POLICE. |
| Margaret Scarlight 2005-08-07 ch 1, | abuseOk. Here we go. First off. 'Praise God for President Bush!" HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! That is HILLARIOUS! Oh yes Praise GOD because GOD is PERFECT! Bull. Next! Better than 'that jerk off John Kelly'. Again, Bull. ANYONE IS BETTER THAN BUSH!! He is a dumbshit like you. Stupid angry american. NEXT! -The president has made many great choices for this country. By going into Iraq he took out Saddam Hussein. That man was terribly evil. He killed many of his own people, as well was also seeking weapons of mass destruction to use against us. We are eliminating the terrorists one by one.- Oh yes, he did all that alright *COUGH HACK WHEEZE* Oh yeah. Perfect Bush. Praise Bush for he is GOD! Next! (I am having so much fun!) -Many of Osame’s top men are dead - Ok learn how to spell, and use puncuation please, as it is getting annoying. Two essays extremly badly written is enough. Next! -He is such a talented man. Praise president bush.- Again Capitalization, puncuation, verbage, didnt you go to school? Did you not graduate? Hmm... wait a moment. Maybe you didn't! **. Open you mind. |
| Amy 2005-08-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseMy, you're full of ** and denial, aren't you?? ** OFF |
| The-Duke-of-Charles 2005-06-14 ch 1, | abuseBefore I dissagree with what was said, let me talk about how it was said. If you scrunched the entire, and I use the term loosly, 'essay' into one paragraph you might have a decent introduction to a real essay. Instead, you gave us a bunch of non-detailed statemnts backed up by nothing at all. Now to the fun part, the valitity (or lack there of) of the points you raised. "He showed great leadership after 9/11. Under his guidance we successfully defeated the Taliban and al qeuida" WHAT? Defeated!? Do you bother to learn or research before writing this or do you just write what happens in your private world of make-beleive? Al-qeuida's leader (Osama Bin Laden) is still at large, with his millions of supporters world-wide, and Al-Queida has been linked with numerous bombings worldwide, the Madrid bombing was the only attack in the west. Next: "His tax cuts saved the country from a recession that would have put us deeper in debt" again I say "WHAT?" By giving tax cuts and ending up with a huge defficite he stoped the country from going in debt? LEt me refraise that: 'By going into debt he kept America from going into debt." I'm no acountant, but that is not only very stupid but it's also imposible. I suppose there was no real need for me to point out how this essay is wrong, it pretty much proves itself wrong. |
| darkmistresslae 2005-05-27 ch 1, | abuseYes.. brilliant job on W's job... putting us into a multi-billion dollar budget deficit (we'd been at a surplus when clinton left office). He sought (and did not find) the weapons that (if they still had) we gave to them in the first place. we did NOT defeate the Taliban, it still exists. and way to go killing thousands of innocent people. and, could you tell me, whatever happened to finding osama bin laden? hmm? that's what I thought Now to the quality of your essay. You just made claims, didn't really support anything. Way too short to be called an essay I think. Also, if you love Bush so much, would you mind capitalizing his name? that's all.yours,heavenly tear drops~~noone died when clinton lied~~*~bush lies, who dies?~* |
| Forest Passant 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseHee hee, you're trying to write again! Didn't you get the point the first time, when you got nothing but hate mail? "He was a lot better choice than that jerk off John Kerry." Glad to see we got beyond third grade and name-calling. "By going into Iraq he took out Saddam Hussein. That man was terribly evil. He killed many of his own people, as well was also seeking weapons of mass destruction to use against us. We are eliminating the terrorists one by one." Oh, yes, he was terribly evil. Probably the worst dictator in the world *cough* *cough* *Kim Il Jung* *cough* "He showed great leadership after 9/11. Under his guidance we successfully defeated the Taliban and al qeuida. Many of Osame’s top men are dead or captured. With exception of the Madrid bombings their hasn’t been a successful. It’s all because of bush’s policies." How about, "He showed great leadership after 9/11. Under his guidance, we successfully defeated the Taliban and al-Qaeda. Many of Osama's top men are dead or captured. With the exception of the Madrid bombings, they haven't succesfully committed any acts of terror. This is due to Bush's policies." Mind you, that's just the grammar and spelling. You still haven't proved your point. "His tax cuts saved the country from a recession that would have put us deeper in debt." Prove it. "He is such a talented man." Good. Glad you think so. But what, pray, is his talent?" "Praise president bush." Yep, right up there with the Gods, President Bush. I'll go set up a shrine. "The best president we’ve had in years." How many years? Just asking. |
| Made in U.S.A. 2005-04-27 ch 1, | abusethis is a joke right? |
| poetic abortion 2005-04-25 ch 1, | abuseI agree that in the situation that Bush did do a half-decent job as president after 9/11. I am no particulary fond nor do I like the fact that he has been reelceted, and I really don't care also. Of what I have heard and of what I have read I don't think he is all that good of a president. Also I think you had a few facts *wrong* on the president, but I coul have heard it wrong but I really think you should check over your facts just oncase. As I said before I don't think her is a *great* president, I don't think he's even good for the matter but I respect your opinions. :P Sorry I am incredibly bored and read this, I'm sorry if I offended you. ^^; Keep writing that way you will get better! !~* Noelle *~! |