|Reviews for Metamorphosis|
| Elephant-Artist 3/8/09 . chapter 1
Great use of descriptive words in this poem. I like the first part the most. Great job. Please read and review my stuff.
| MockingbirdDreams 8/27/07 . chapter 1
So sweet and beautiful. I adore it. It has just a whimsical feel!
| Nobody-n-Particular 7/16/06 . chapter 1
| quazzarr too lazy to log in 6/14/06 . chapter 1
omg i had a huge thing to tell you... and i hit shift esc which deleted EVERYTHING AH basically it siad..1 nice poem2 im never gunna ever read all 2202.5 i bet they all rock tho3 ill comment ur 6th entry4 i think you;ll like my lesbian lament5 something about ... i dont knoe..6 ... i was asking what sardonic meant5 after asking what sardonic meant ... i said that it might be what 4 is all about...6.. no.. 7 AH *confused* ... yea... ok... well imma go.. .cause i just messed with my head.. keep it up and ... 3 ...Quazzarr
| toastyluv 5/27/06 . chapter 1
this was very beautiful. I loved it so much. you are a great poet.
| SirScott 5/19/06 . chapter 1
Nice poem. I enjoyed its flow. I heard you were a good writer and you are.
Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, SirScott
| bahaghari 4/21/06 . chapter 1
Wow, Namir! The movement in this poem just blew me away. I love it.
It's always refreshing to find good writers here. Uh-huh, I think you're very talented.
| D.M. Ralte 4/14/06 . chapter 1
Wow. i love this! u'r writing style is truly unique. so much so that i had to go chek out your bio page he he. i do believ i'm met my match in musical/reading tastes. Definitely one of the most talented writers/poets on fictionpress.
| in theory 3/13/06 . chapter 1
Wow what a strange and absorbing bio. And you use language so flawlessly, it's addictive. (I'll be reading more when I get the time) peace
| Jake 3/7/06 . chapter 1
beautiful as always
| cjwriter 1/15/06 . chapter 1
Wow, very good! .
| not sure yet 11/8/05 . chapter 1
short and to the point, muchly nicely little piece here, good flow, well done
| Charity F 9/19/05 . chapter 1
lovely..."mold me into something new; something beautiful; for you"...truly amazing...
congrats on ur grill purchase! again, thanx so much for the review - its was very nice of you and made me feel special...
i'd love to see more poetry coming out of you, write about anything - about how the sky is green for all i care! your talent is inspiring for all of us...
Tabitha the Great
| ValkyrieRavenfeather 9/14/05 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Just so you know, I'm bisexual, too.
| ACCOUNT NO LONGER ACTIVE 1 9/8/05 . chapter 1
Really beautiful, I lvoed it.