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Elephant-Artist 2009-03-08 . chapter 1
Great use of descriptive words in this poem. I like the first part the most. Great job. Please read and review my stuff.
GIProphet 2007-08-27 . chapter 1
So sweet and beautiful. I adore it. It has just a whimsical feel!
Nobody-n-Particular 2006-07-16 . chapter 1
Lovely alliteration.
~quazzarr too lazy to log in... 2006-06-14 . chapter 1
omg i had a huge thing to tell you... and i hit shift esc which deleted EVERYTHING AH basically it siad..1 nice poem2 im never gunna ever read all 2202.5 i bet they all rock tho3 ill comment ur 6th entry4 i think you;ll like my lesbian lament5 something about ... i dont knoe..6 ... i was asking what sardonic meant5 after asking what sardonic meant ... i said that it might be what 4 is all about...6.. no.. 7 AH *confused* ... yea... ok... well imma go.. .cause i just messed with my head.. keep it up and ... 3 ...~Quazzarr
toastyluv 2006-05-27 . chapter 1
this was very beautiful. I loved it so much. you are a great poet.
SirScott 2006-05-19 . chapter 1
Nice poem. I enjoyed its flow. I heard you were a good writer and you are.

Wishing You Good Health And Plenty Of Wealth, ~SirScott~
gracie.domingo 2006-04-21 . chapter 1
Wow, Namir! The movement in this poem just blew me away. I love it.

It's always refreshing to find good writers here. Uh-huh, I think you're very talented.
D.M. Ralte 2006-04-14 . chapter 1
Wow. i love this! u'r writing style is truly unique. so much so that i had to go chek out your bio page he he. i do believ i'm met my match in musical/reading tastes. Definitely one of the most talented writers/poets on fictionpress.
in theory 2006-03-13 . chapter 1
Wow what a strange and absorbing bio. And you use language so flawlessly, it's addictive. (I'll be reading more when I get the time) peace
Jake 2006-03-07 . chapter 1
beautiful as always
cjwriter 2006-01-15 . chapter 1
Wow, very good! ^.^
not sure yet 2005-11-08 . chapter 1
short and to the point, muchly nicely little piece here, good flow, well done
Charity F 2005-09-19 . chapter 1
lovely..."mold me into something new; something beautiful; for you"...truly amazing...

congrats on ur grill purchase! again, thanx so much for the review - its was very nice of you and made me feel special...

i'd love to see more poetry coming out of you, write about anything - about how the sky is green for all i care! your talent is inspiring for all of us...

=D luvya!

~Tabitha the Great
ValkyrieRavenfeather 2005-09-14 . chapter 1
Beautiful. Just so you know, I'm bisexual, too.
Beautifula 2005-09-08 . chapter 1
Really beautiful, I lvoed it.
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