Your poem is one of the better vampire poems I've read. I really like it. I want to see more writing by you.

Wow...this is absolutely amazing, I love the feeling and the imagery. Very well written. -Justin-

oh, that's a good poem... all those "ohs" are for shock and liking... hee hee... I like this more than I like cake! M, cake... hee hee hee... sorry, in quite an odd mode... see ya later!

I feel very honoured to have inspired you. Because this is wonderful. ^__^ I really like the flow of this poem, and the idea is always interesting. ...I need to go write another poem now. Hmm.

Beautifully written! Love the dark mood of the poem and the choice of words, especially in the last few lines.