so few words, but still powerfull

bottled lies. wonderful. hateful daze. completely true. loved it.

wow, are you psychic...LOL! that sounds like me... great job! kario

oh swoon.

(psst guess who?)even though you might guess or not.

sip of your bottled lies-classic, simple, and ever so sour.

"hateful sip of your bottled lies" Ah, very good. I like that a lot. Bottled lies… now that's an awesome phrase.

I adore it.

That's what alcohol is... a bottle of lies... wow, you really must've put a WHOLE BUNCH of thought into what you write! I mean, it's just amazing the detail and imagery you put in your poems! I don't think I can COMPARE to you! Just like the rose... AH! NO! I don't wanna die because of that! GEE, this stuff is really rubbing off on me, isn't it? It was a very good poem, though, BRILLIANT!

Sweet. I hate alcohol :]

So much emotion in such few lines. Very nice! The last line is truly powerful.

(Thanks for adding me! *feels special* I'm glad you liked my poem, Seductress, so much!)

wow really liked how short and to the point. the last line is great and completes this small poem perfectly.

*SW*

Thank you for your review on Riders ch. 4 im glad that you're hooked ) i'll be updating as soon as possible! thxs for liking it! D

i like the last line...has great meaning

Wow, I love short poems! Very deep and true.

that last line is just so stong, nicely done.

hey, short but sweet. Where was this when I drank myself to sleep two nights ago? *sigh* life's a biatch. keep up the great work. write more soon!

Wow. I loved the twist (if it is considered a twist) of it being a bottle of lies. Nice job.