Lusty sin? In general, comparisons are good, I can feel your pain. But lusty sin? You can find better words.

It's so rich...I love the way you write...so very, very rich...

i truely enjoyed this poem maybe because part of it reminds me of something. the way you expressed your pain is extremly breathtaking!

your feelings get through really well. good job and keep writing!

Ah...that is so depressing!! I think I read too much depressing/write too much depressing stuff...lol...

Well written indeed!!

This is amazing. So sad and powerful. I have to read more!

it's a very powerful poem, and i totally understand where you're coming from :( i'm sorry that you had to write this poem because of what happened. hopefully, you'll have better luck next time! :P

Not your best but still pretty. I like it muchly.

wow.. that is one of your bests.. its so beutifully written and so powerful and the images are awesome... great job ::adds to favs::

PS do you know how to make stanzas? if not I could show you