ahaa...and now they're going to save kaori! ..or wait. no...what happened in the last chapter. o_e;; update soon. teehee.

I think Kinmedai sounds better, as it is somewhat similar to Kurenai, so in a pair of two different people it would maybe be good if they had something in common..

Bravo! you did a very good job on this chpt. and i can't wait till the next one!

also would you mind reviewing my story "forgotten tears and shadows"?i'm an amature writer and i need input and opinions from more expierenced than myself.

i wish u luck on ur writing and i hope u finish the next chpt. soon!

i luv ur story it's good.evil dictators,evil sinister disguised doctor,no hope for escape but yet looks like ther still might b a chance.it keeps u on ur toes,and always suprised on how things turned out.also u blended an intersesting style and genre of wrinting

i can't wait till the next chpt!wish u luck on ur writing!

..uwahh. scary mad man. o O;;

...no...captain adair is cool!! nyah. update soon! :D

Hey! Pretty good chapter! Gotta read on!

OMG, it is a sunny day and this story made me feel really scared. I wouldn´t want to be Captain Adair, even if someone gave me all the money in the world for that. What is going to happen to Kurenai now?

Your story has become very interesting, though it hasn´t answered my questions yet. Probably because I had some problems remembering what happened before.. but I do remember it now. That was the big problem with Harry Potter too, I couldn´t remember for a long time what happened in the 5th book. Anyway, the 6th was so depressing. Why do my favourite characters always have to get killed? Sirius, Dumbledore and if Hermione gets killed in the 7th then I won´t forgive it to Rowling. I just had to say all that Harry Potter thing somewhere.

..we. stray that returned home. cool. update soon! ^^-

Yes. Yes, you did answer my questions. >.
This chapter was excellent, per usual. But now you have even more to explain, which I'm sure you will be doing in the upcoming chapters. Oh the jou of finding out what happens next!

--RMS

HARRY POTTER!! :;spasm:: i finished!! IT'S SO FREAKIN GOOD!! ...so much better than the 5th. ::kills the 5th:: the 5th was annying. D

YAY! You updated! I should follow your example... Anyways, I really liked this. Who is Kaishou, and where is Kurenai?

we...nice chapter! update sooN! ^^-

I like the way Dr.Daray speaks.

Moon? Whats a moon? I'm assuming it isn't like the moon in the sky, but more like some kind of fighting creature of doom.

Please update asap!

--Rock My Socks