i hope this isnt a personal experience...

This was absolutely wonderful, something I am going through. I think it was great to write this about your friend.

This is very good and depicts emotions very well. ^_^ You seem like a good friend to this person. Keep up the good work.

Give your friend a hug, they deserve it. Verbal/ emotional abuse sucks... it comes in different ways but I think a lot of us experience it. Sometimes outside sources help us regain hope. This poem tackles the theme well. Thank you for your words.

this is good poem! i really liked the ending espiaclly but just one thing- when you write the summary for the poem don't put those two last lines because it give the ending away and its the strongest part! just a suggestion. keep up the good work! :)