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| Shadow-Walking-Tactician-VI 2007-03-06 ch 1, | abuseOoh!! It sounds pretty god so far, i bet Hane is gonna probably play some part in the story! Core's personality is awesome! His eyes really tell alot about his character...I hope you'll continue to write this story! Update soon and good luck at keeping writing! |
| DownerLithium 2005-08-25 ch 1, | abuseYour probably onto bigger and better things by now, but this has really captured my interest. Im with anonymous guy. Keep goin with this. |
| anon 2005-07-25 ch 1, anon. | abuseplease continue |