Hi! It's Briley AKA. End Of THe Innocence...AKA Enchanted Pen...yeah a new account these ones keep dying on me.

Anyway, good poem. You can't seem to decide if you want it to be free verse or structured with rhymes. Good imagery though...

I am sorry you feel this way though.

sounds good to me ^^

also sounds like something many of us believe - you're right, live free or die young is the only solution now.