That was a really nice story :D

Hey! I just finished reading your story and it's amazing! The historical facts seem so realistic and the Jack boy's accent? Perfect.
BTW, it just so happens we had this LA project where I do a book report on a historical fiction book. My teacher said it was fine to do a report on a story I found online.
Unfortunately, I do have to write a brief history of the author and your biography page...seems to be lacking information.
Just out of curiosity, would you have the pleasure of telling me a bit of yourself? No need to tell me your age or real name (If Danielle Night isn't your real name, of course.), just some basic facts I could use.
Somewhat similar to a "About the Author", you know?

Thanks.

Sabanoodles

It's been a while since I last read this and it's a great feeling rereading this. It's an awesome first chapter. Very intriguing and holds attention. :)

Great

Aww. Just as sweet upon re-reading.
You know, I'd really love to read future Jack's story.

Heehee I LOVE Jack!

I'm back for a re-read :)

ohhh Jack. He is so awesome.

Ooo! Awesome story! I love all the flower meanings.

Aww, I loved this story! Very refreshing and different. Beautiful proposal on Adrian's part, so romantic and attentive. Jack is just the best all around. Excellent story! Please keep writing.

Aww! This has got to be one of the most engaging opening chapters I've ever read in a story. You've got a feisty nonconformist for a heroine - which I really love - an adorable kid sidekick, and a classically romantic gentleman as her suitor. And the entire thing takes place far back in history, which makes it even better! (Please excuse spelling mistakes, I'm typing on my phone) Gorgeously written beginning, especially Annabelle's recitation of what would happen if Adrian didn't know who she was... it was hilarious! Love this story so much already! :D

Ahaha, I love this story. :) Its so original and witty. :) I also really like Melanie. She's a nice older sister.

love it.

This story is absolutely awesome and literally the best thing ever since spray-able cheese!

Siriusly!

Penn

HAHA ya bleedin' sod. You crack me up.
Though the details are lacking, I'm starting to like this story. It's an interesting idea. Let's see where it goes.

It's an interesting idea, definitely, but I would've liked it to be slightly better written. It was rather stilted and not very descriptive.