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infiniteternity 2009-10-31 . chapter 18
Danielle, apparently it's already been taken care of.
Read the last post here: /talk/lofiversion/index.php/t37.html

Sorry for worrying you and I really do thank you for all of your hard work and dedication in writing this story. I loved it to bits and pieces and have read it (alas, in other forms) over and over again. Thank you once again.
infiniteternity 2009-10-26 . chapter 1
I absolutely love your story and I think it's such a lovely way of bringing it all together... only I wish I had read it on this website first. I hope you are the same author that posted it on Fanfiction under the Harry Potter archive lol. Thank you soo much for your hard work and dedication!
CeriseCherry 2009-10-25 . chapter 18
Oh, that was a wonderful romance. It makes mine look shoddy. *pouts*

Anyway, there are a few typos scattered here and there among the chapters, but it's mostly very neat and tidied up. Once again, I must compliment you on your lovely story. I especially love the very last sentence...nostalgic, that's what it is.

I can't imagine any guy ever sending a girl a hundred and eight roses. Which just makes Adrian all the more unique.
CeriseCherry 2009-10-23 . chapter 1
I like this idea! I haven't found anything wrong with it (yet) and that is good because I am one picky girl. Also, a question: do bluebottles seriously mean that?

*It's okay to start a new story without finishing the old. We know you're in a temporary writer's block for those, and we won't even care if you never-ever finish them (actually depends on how good they are, but if they're like this one...anyway, applaud me, I'm trying to make you feel better).
rollinby 2009-10-18 . chapter 18
absolutely delightful!! i loved the writing style!! also u keep writing Twon as ton ... :s there is a difference in the meaning
StoRy LovEr! 2009-09-02 . chapter 18
Awesome story! Dude why don't u publish it!
Its too good!!
LaraineGlass 2009-08-24 . chapter 1
Wow. I have to say that this is one of the most original stories on Fiction Press. Also, I can't stop drooling over Adrian. LOL.
three 2009-08-19 . chapter 18
Loved your story! So sweet. Thank you for sharing!
azerjaban 2009-08-18 . chapter 18
Your story was definitely unique and lovely.

My only peeve was that they were suddenly in love after a couple of kisses and short conversations. We didn't see them interact much aside from through flowers (which was most of the time consisted of her chiding him and him trying to apologize or appease her).

I had hoped for some deeper meanings or conversations.

I do love all your characters however. And your writing flows very well. The ending just seemed unrealistic.

Nevertheless, thank you for the read.
TiggerGurl 2009-07-30 . chapter 18
How amusing! This story was very very interesting. I had some laughs. I like your side comments, makes it more interesting as well! Keep up the good work!
Kayla Brown 2009-07-26 . chapter 18
You're good
the Pearl 2009-07-24 . chapter 18
An awesome read, thanks so much for submitting this. :-) I love little things like how the meanings of the flowers aren't just based on imagination. Jack was an adorable character with his dialect and all. :-)

Some of my favourite scenes were the ones with Jacob and then Adrian's conversation with Melanie when Melanie hinted him to the right direction. The last chapter with the proposal was most imaginative as well and the epilogue was also sweet. ^^
lecabe 2009-07-16 . chapter 18
love, love, love it! :) absolutely amazing!

i was getting a tiny bit annoyed with annabelle in the closing chapters and her incredible determination NOT to marry the man she loved..but i think that's what made her such an intriguing character :)
Cleopatra1 2009-07-13 . chapter 18
I just finished reading this story and am absolutely in love with it! You've done an amazing job getting Adrian and Annabelle together. I really like the proposal and the flower messages sent by both in the beginning chapters. Very nicely written!
Maggie Summers 2009-07-08 . chapter 18
When I read the summary of this story, I was intrigued, but I didn't expect much. I thought it would be cute, a light piece of fluff, nothing that would make my heart melt and my face hurt from the size of my smiles.

I was wrong.

It was an amazingly original, beautifully written piece of work. The characters were well developed and compelling. The plot line was adorable and quirky. The pace was fast and you always stayed on point. I think this is the first multi-chapter story I've read on fictionpress that didn't need serious editing. It was polished and wonderful, and I'm in love with it.

Fantastic, amazing, wonderful, gorgeous, romantic.

I'm like, giddy. It was amazing. I loved it!

-Maggie
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