Reviews for Childhood Squiggles

The Random Witness 2005-06-24 ch 1,	abuseI know how you mean! So true! i've found that it seems so fast, the transition of child to adult; your child-life you spend acting like a grown up and once you become one you long for the lost youth. And while ur stuck in the teen between you still have that youth but are expected to leave that behind and you DO, as ur life issues differ and you change...well yeah, that what i got out of the poem..lol~TRW
negligible fictional force 2005-01-24 ch 1,	abuselove the concept, dig the words. a little too mature for the concept though yeah. -kismet.
linaeve 2005-01-23 ch 1,	abuse...speechless. oh, that last line- perfection. utter perfection. and the poem goes so perfectly with the quote... your word-use, the flow- all so beautiful. i don't think i'm being very constructive, am i? ah well. cheers, lin.
sins-pride 2005-01-23 ch 1,	abuseYou have quite a piece there. It depicts the foolishless of a child and yet that is what all of yearn in our adulthood. Your poem clarifies and dignifies that sometimes being childish ain't that bad after all. Simply wonderful. Keep it up.
catseyeview 2005-01-23 ch 1,	abuseI love the inspiration taken from the quote of Picasso! Wonderful work.