Reviews for High School Years

Reviews For: High School Years

NOLONGERPOSTING 2005-12-02 ch 1,	I'm sorry, I was going to read your story, but then the block format through me off and was very intimidating. Try seperating it all into paragraphs
worstwriteronfic 2005-11-29 ch 60,	this is one long story
BeautifulSin 2005-11-02 ch 1,	IM SO IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!!
Serendipity Pierce-Clarke 2005-10-08 ch 60,	Wow..talk about a whirlwind romance! Excellently written, one of my favortie stories! I hadnt read this si a while, and i was super surprised to find that youd finished, and it was 60 chapters! like wow..ive read all of it, form begining to end, it took me allday! this is great!
c 2005-09-24 ch 1,	hi i just wold like to say that i thought from your summary that this may be a good story but your set up with the huge blocks of none stop text changed my mind. i'm not saying your story is bad or good because i have not read it i just wanted to say this so u could perhaps change it because it is doning you no favors having your story set up like this u need to make it appeling and easy to readhope you keep writingc
tryin too help 2005-07-20 ch 2,	wew. ya know u hit that enter button twice and it does some great things. everything is smushed together especially in chapter one. the whole chapter is ONE paragraph. also i think ur making this relationship seem a little too innocent. if i was reachel i'd be a ** too seeing how nick is CHEATING ON HER. well anyways don't think in being mean because just like it says, Im just tying to help.
magickal 2005-05-31 ch 5,	omg this girl needs to get some self eestemm and tell this guy it's either her or him he can't have both!! gah!!it's so annoying i hope your not planning on having them together to much longer but i guess i'll find out soon enough haha :D p.s sorry i meant to write this sooner but got caught up in ch2 you wrote that they 'shook'their heads to indication that they were ready to leave when it should have been 'nodded' shook generally implies a negitive response just a little positive feedback little things like that can make or break the story hope it helps
ChocolateSugar 2005-05-13 ch 13,	Wow, this is really good. I want to become a writer someday except right now I can't seem to write enough to make it an actual novel. I was amazed when I saw that you had written 60 chapters! Long chapters too! I think you would make a wonderful published author and you really have inspired me. Please keep writing!
Serendipity Pierce-Clarke 2005-04-26 ch 18,	AH!! i love it! you are such a good writer. tho it kinda seems like it belongs on FanFiction...keep writing!
sugarbarbie 2005-01-26 ch 15,	Wow...brings back memories of my life. I was a result of an unwanted baby and mom was forced to get married and being abused because of her hating me, too. Keep up the story and looking forward to your next update.
hrtbreaker4eva 2005-01-25 ch 10,	Great story UPDAYE SOON! btw I don't like her parents at all. But update soon!
sugarbarbie 2005-01-25 ch 10,	Great story so far. Waiting for your next post. Cannot wait to see where you take this. Update soon.

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