WOW! I personally found a tune for it (in my head) by it might not be yours... well I really like this one!

Amazing song - i could totally see the tune (ahem... sang it while i was reading...) and it's VERY good. Usually in a review this is the point where i make a suggestion, but I can't honestly think of any... so yep. again, loved it. off to read more of your poems... (PS if i dont review on any others that doesnt mean i didn't read them it means im just 2 lazy to review!) :) (PPS you are going on my favorite authors list)

Again, I have to say, as a GOTR fan, its mandatory that I adore you.

But I do that anyway.

I really liked this, I could really see GOTR sining it, its got a very nice flow to it. I could definatlty picture hearing it on the radio.

I like it alot, its an awsome song, awsome work.

Sorry I havnt been around much to review, but thanks for yours, they mean alot to me.

Love

Alice

Beautifuly written. "It feels like the World's pourin' salt in my wounds" is my favorite line. I absolutely love this, and I really hope to hear it behind music someday because I think it would be a big hit. I really like the title too. Great work. :)

aw... so sweet~~ i likes!! Must be a great song when sung, i wish i can hear it^^ good job~

keep writing!

XD I really like your penname. :D Now this was cool. Nicely written and down very well. ^-^; Great job!!

!~* Noelle *~!

...I was randomly going around to my favorites' pages and realized, GAH! you have a song up that I have neither read nor reviewed. So I did both. And I like it! I have to admit, when I was reading it, I was getting more of an Eagles feel, but that's just me, because I'm weird. I definitely like this and my only problem is that you're not writing! Ah!

Well, anyway, thanks for putting up with my hyper, spazzing review, and I hope it made you smile. And remember, it's all fun and games until someone hits a moose. ;-)

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This is great! Really enjoyed reading it. I can kinda feel the energy from it. Very cool. QueenVixta

Very nicely written. I was hooked all the way through, you are a natural.. I'm jealous lol. But yes, very, very nicely done. And I'm SO sorry it took so long to review, hun! Been busy lately, I'll try to be faster next time.

this is wonderful! Im gonna go and buy ur album if u decide to do one.

Wow, this is weird. I know I reviewed this...but I guess fictionpress musta screwed up. I'll say it again, this is awesome and you are a great writer! Keep it up, hehe :D

I adore this! Really I love everything that you write but your recent songs are major improvements. I totally picture this being played by a sexy band like Franz. Keep writing :D

First thing. Proof read!

Anyway, this is amazing. I wish I could write songs as well as you can. Touches on so many issues in my life too. WOuld love to hear this played out. Awesome.~Hawke P.S. Been awhile hasn't it?

thats awesome! about bloody time you posted something. now, am i suposed to write you an email or are you replying to me, lol! i lost track again, shame on me... anyhoo, awesome song.