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| luostwanderor 2007-10-15 ch 2, | abuseHee ^^ This is cute! The name "Girps" is amusing in some way... |
| Rotten247 2006-06-12 ch 1, | abuseReally cool story. I hope you write more. I don't usually like to read stories on here but this one is awesome. PLEASE WRITE MORE!Rotten |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-08 ch 2, | abuseThat was also weird but good for a first try, ya know when people say that it's as thoough they're saying it's bad! I don't think it's bad, honsetly!! write more |
| White is a Sin 2005-12-08 ch 1, | abuseYou call that a cute face, Keh... well that was weird sorta, but it was a prologue... he he this is weird still... |
| o0oAnnie 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abuseGreat piece so far! (if you're writing more I can't wait to read it) interesting and kinda scary concept that they're buying planets and "raising humans"...makes you kinda feel insignificant...keep writing! |