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Reviews For: The True Creation Story

luostwanderor
2007-10-15
ch 2,
abuseHee ^^

This is cute! The name "Girps" is amusing in some way...
Rotten247
2006-06-12
ch 1,
abuseReally cool story. I hope you write more. I don't usually like to read stories on here but this one is awesome. PLEASE WRITE MORE!Rotten
White is a Sin
2005-12-08
ch 2,
abuseThat was also weird but good for a first try, ya know when people say that it's as thoough they're saying it's bad!

I don't think it's bad, honsetly!!

write more
White is a Sin
2005-12-08
ch 1,
abuseYou call that a cute face, Keh...

well that was weird sorta, but it was a prologue...

he he this is weird still...
o0oAnnie
2005-01-23
ch 1,
abuseGreat piece so far! (if you're writing more I can't wait to read it) interesting and kinda scary concept that they're buying planets and "raising humans"...makes you kinda feel insignificant...keep writing!
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