*sniff, sniff* i like it, but it's so sad.

*cries*

You have mastered the art of surprising and devestating your reader. That was so sad.

Stop the violence! Nice story.

aww... that is soo sad! god... what people will do for money! ay... stop the violence is right... do you think it will ever stop? cos i surely don't! on another note, this was very good and well written! i like!

I agree the story could have been longer but the message was clear and I think thats the point.

Wow! That's horribly sad! (don't worry that's a good thing.) did this really happen? Also you are right the violence should stop!

Okay, I liked the concept and your message, but I think you could lengthen this and make it really profound...and at one point you said Amy when I think you meant Jenny, so get your names straight. But like I said, I liked the message.