i got you a jacket! *hands over white jacket with straps* just kidding. that was interesting

Don't listen to the oter reviewer - I thought that sentence made sense. I'm sort of assuming this is a one-shot, which i usually dont read, but this is an exception. it was REALLY good, although confusing at some points. but still understandable, and i think that's what confused me. :D this was awesome!

things i liked about this story:1. the beginning2. the end

things i didnt like as much as the things i did like:3. the middle4. this sentence :"I want nothing more than to be untangled from this web of untrained thoughts and anger and to be released in a shell of my own."

reasons for 4: it just doesnt make very much sense. and by it doesnt make very much sense i mean you word usage is pretty bad. and by your word usage is pretty bad i mean i think you definitely defintely definitely could have found a way to say whatever the hell you were trying to say in a less ackward fashion.

conclusion: despite my dislike for the sentence mentioned above, i really enjoyed reading this and im going to add it to my favorite stories list.