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| CovinS 2005-01-25 ch 1,  | abuseI like this poem. Maybe not the real-life scenario of it, but it's well written and the tone is consistent. The lines seem fluid and i could actually say it out loud as i read it without tripping over myself. That's pretty good. |
| somefreakylooknchick 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abusecool title. This poem is full of subtle anger. good job! |