I love this your such a good poet you deverse more reveiws then you have. ~Vimpire~

and return with a vengeance on my lips...i know what you mean...wonderful poem, as always

the imagery you used is very good. great poem.

I really like the words in this.'Shatter the ice of my eyes' loved that line. One thing to criticise

"Forgetting everything left be hide" should the end read 'behind'?

i love it.