(my internet...sucks...i just wrote a pretty long review, then, it doesn't post it..and it didn't give me a chance to copy!! X_X)very excellent poem, i'm guessing you're talking about the government?? because, umm, you did put this in the politics section...BUT! anyways!! yeppers, the government is a cruel...cruel...thing. but it's our system. i esepcially like these lines:"Who cares if you get sick

A drink's a drink who gives a lick

Not my water?

Not your problem"

and

"Over there the sky is blue

Not for long, not for long, not for long

Too true, too true, too true"

and, yet again,"Swim along with the glum fish

Go for all that flows below

Go for it reap what we sow"

I love this poem, i shall add it to my favorites. ^_^ :)

I love this. It's got some very interesting imagery..Hrm.. It seems almost whimsical, though I doubt that was what you were going for.