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| Captain Lucky 2006-03-31 ch 7,  | abuseWow! That's probably one of the best stories I've ever read here. I liked how it was really written the way a teenager would narrate their life. Not like in my, and most other stories, where everyone talks like Shakespeare or something. It was funny too, which was a pleasant change...b/c I couldn't be that funny if I tried. Anyway, I heart this story. Keep it up! =) |
| Kahn the Hun 2006-02-15 ch 7, | abuseOh wow. This is so exciting! *typing while hanging on to seat* I wish I was that creative. You are good! |
| kaika switched 2005-05-11 ch 7, | abuseI'm not a huge fan on short chapters, but that's okay. I really like this story. I love the narrator and I love how she describes everything so cynically and how she sees it. Great story. Keep writing! |
| kp-828 2005-05-02 ch 7, | abuseI like it! keep it up! You should read my first sight. I think you would like it. |
| Daffodil Elizabeth 2005-02-19 ch 6, | abuseHaha!! I love it when the prince charming turns out to be prince not-so-charming!! Keep on writing! |
| Thecos 2005-01-27 ch 3, | abusevery funny... but you need to add some ending...like what happens to the dress. and the prince. lol. -Thec. |
| Guitarchic1224 2005-01-26 ch 1, | abuseHey Colleen, This is a great story, but what does happen to the dress, now you've got me hook! |
| Alexis Kent 2005-01-24 ch 2, | abusePretty good! I liked it, but the chapters are very short... maybe you could make them longer? |
| somefreakylooknchick 2005-01-23 ch 1, | abuseoh my god. that is amazing. lol "what happened to the dress"I will never again wish for something unusual to happen in my boring life. |