You are awesome! This was beyond intense, and breathtaking! And thanks for your nice reviews! :)

wow... I'm so speechless with all of your work!! Thank you for all the reviews!! I'm sorry I didn't review this work earlier. Its just... so good that I can't find words to discribe it n_n

Ouch. That makes *my* heart hurt. ...how horrible. The injustice and unhappiness is so tangible, it awakens anger I push back--which, of course, is good, eliciting emotion is the sign of a truly good story! Nice work. *skips off to punch something*

just simply melancholy and beautiful! one of your best works of poetry yet, hope you update your stuff soon i'm very excited!-anime freakizoid X^_^X

wow.this is... awesome.i absolutely love the way you used metaphors here. i can definately tell writing is your passion.-ADD

I appreciate your metaphors and descriptive imagery. Good work.

HI!. this is a good story I liked the way you decribed things.

um I was wondering if you review marrige vs murder on my behalf as the author doesn't accept annoymes reviews.

anyway good work on this story.

see ya

This is really great. Hating the people that gain the very thing you had lost, yet never had to begin with. That's what popped into my mind when I read this. The writing is great and very emotional (just what I like n_n) Keep it up.

BTW, thankies for reviewing my poem. Glad you liked it