wonderful. i really like the tone, sound, wording and ideas you have. great job.

Oh, that's so sad. Or, to me, anyway. It makes me think of a predicament I'm in. -sigh- But let's not get into that. I loved it! As usual, you write so well. Keep it up!

Don't stop doin' whatcha doin', ~Hotaru-chan

This is a nice poem! I like the emotion you put into your words.