I really like it -smile-. it was amusing and the definition of a kiss sounds spiffy in a scientific sort of way.

That was really quite clever, and the poetic language of the stanzas complements the last line rather well. Also, I think that the first line conveys an entire concept that is, at least in some cases, rather true of relationships, and perhaps best explained as you did, vaguely, simply, subjectively.

Kudos

nice. I liked it. its the first time ive read one like that. the difinition was verry funny! just to chow how scientists complicate things! -xox-freindly! bye! bye!