you write very well..keep up the good work.

I've always wondered about that. I guess it's like when you used to be friends with someone and then you don't talk anymore, it can be the same for dating, too. I liked this.

thats sad.i know just what ya felt,and i think we all know the answers we just have to find them in job.

Short, but good.

Anna

Life is the only thing that makes the world go round besides people like you

Wow shorter than expected. Says a lot in few words though. Well done!

powerful...wow...

Its really weird when thoughts like these crop up, youve condensed all that into a beauty of a poem.

interesting.. can be read multiple ways.. I liek it

Nice poem is it a hiku? (sp?) anyway short but sweet havent we all felt that way at one point great concept in a short but great poemsee ya im off Aalagi-san

Ah, yet another thought-provoking poem . . . you write so nicely. I wish I could channel your spirit or something and write like that . . . .

Oh my goodness, you actually got e to THINK! I always thought you'd need a brain for that, but I just proved myself wrong . . . .

'Twas completely friggin' awesome. Keep it up!

First of all thank you for the reviews you've posted, they are always appreciated.

Introspective and thoughtful piece that I think only the writer could answer; that is, unless a person has gone through this complexity of emotion. A very provocative work if fully understood.

Well Done

KEEP WRITING!

F.C

I think you may enjoy some of my new pieces. See what you think. :-)

Good, solid writing. Makes the reader think. You have a talent for communication in a small amount of words. It's a kind of modern Haiku

short sweet to the point, conveys worlds of meaning and emotion in three lines. keep writing!

i dont get it... i like , but dont get it..