Really great wording...I just felt it all...I really like the rhymes scheme, it all just flows so well...You have a great talent

aww, so sad, but beautiful. Elysium and Asylum sound pretty good together..but! anyways!i especially liked these lines:"We don’t know emerald or what it means

The only color is of your eyes

Blue is blue, just like the skies"

and"A summer’s breath is worth a kiss

Nothing here is worth a fist"well written, good job!! ^_^ :)

I like this so much. It's pretty, and makes me feel... happy, imagining walking through Elysium. I love the words you chose and the way you put them together. *hugs*I need to write more...

I like your references to Greek mythology, since I'm a fan myself. Reading this was very calming and mellow (but not bland), like meandering somewhere. The words are gentle and soothing--very much like the experience you have so honestly captured of being with someone you love. The rhyming is subtle and it expresses the tranquility and serenity of death. It's refreshing a positive view of death to contrast the distressing terror that so many other people allege death to be.

wow... love the imagery... beautiful... has a simularity the F.L. Block's Ecstasia... maybe its just me... the city int eh book is called Elasya or something along those lines... it coudl just be me and my wierdness... thats besides the point.. this... was... fantastic...

love always,Psyche{Searching for my Punk Ska Eros}

Beautiful. The descriptions are really amazing. Excellent poem! Thanks also for your review on Your Pity. I felt you really understood where I was coming from. Thanks ;)