I really like this. Somethign about the way it sounds and flows is so faunting. Keep up the good work. Come check out some of my stuff.

~Orien

I've been having fun just trying to figure out this poem. It's really good and I'm gonna read it again.

This was very well written, you got to your point and it was explained with a passion within. Very good Job.

Hmm... I like this :) Great rhyming. Love the ending.