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| Summer Frost 2008-09-08 ch 1, | abuseRead my Fire and Ice poem please |
| Earthbound Angel 49 2005-02-13 ch 1, | abusethis is so powerful! i love comparing emotions to the elements so this appealed to me greatly. love the poem. |
| BeautifulEcho 2005-01-25 ch 1, | abusei liked it. well written. also, the line "Like a snowman" was somewhat amusing to me. lol iono. it was good though. deep, intense emotions. the "fire" is all to familiar to me. lol. keep writing,as i know u will. ta-ta my sweet! lol haha :) ~BeautifulEcho~ |
| stardustedxsoul 2005-01-24 ch 1, | abuseyou did a lovely job of encompassing two polar opposites in one poem...the comparison and transition from one to the other was nicely done. |