Read my Fire and Ice poem please

this is so powerful! i love comparing emotions to the elements so this appealed to me greatly. love the poem.

i liked it. well written. also, the line "Like a snowman" was somewhat amusing to me. lol iono. it was good though. deep, intense emotions. the "fire" is all to familiar to me. lol. keep writing,as i know u will. ta-ta my sweet! lol haha :)

~BeautifulEcho~

you did a lovely job of encompassing two polar opposites in one poem...the comparison and transition from one to the other was nicely done.