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Mlle. Daae 2005-03-24 . chapter 1
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Great job.

~Mlle. Daae
artcriticx 2005-02-18 . chapter 1
Here you used these simple types of sentences again. There isn't anything extraordinary or poetic about this poem.
Maxwell K 2005-01-24 . chapter 1
awesome poem!
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