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Reviews For: First Kiss
Getuie 2005-03-11 . chapter 1
"You puckered up your lips, and closed your eyes;Just praying that you wouldn’t miss."

*laughs* I found this quite amusing. Very cute
catseyeview 2005-01-29 . chapter 1
this is just beautiful and full of innocence. very sweet and romantic.
RNL 2005-01-26 . chapter 1
Beautiful
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