wow.

I like it. You convey the imagry well.

I really like your style of writing. I would attempt such I formatt but I'm afraid I wouldnt really do it justice. My fav line was: I want to fall like a raindrop between your lips...Really beautiful imagry. Keep it up! Dana

Aw. So sad, but beautiful. I was gonna point out a few lines that I liked but there are just too many! Good job.

hauntingly-beautiful!

Reminds me of Tool lyrics somehow. I guess that's because try to I compare everything poetic with Maynard's lyrics. Anyway, I like this. Again, the imagery is amazing and elegant, and the way it flows and sums up at the end is profound. I love the line about coffee-it's just such a simple thing to compare it to that the seemingly random metaphor settles right in place like a gear.

Loved it. Your poems are truely wonderful. Very, VERY well done. So captivating, and expressive. Must say this was wonderful...though I suppose I've said that already, haven't I? Beautiful work,-Rae

wonderful poem, i love how you express your feelings so fully in these words.

Beautiful, I can relate to this so well...

This is very sweet, and it flows smoothly. I really like it.

Beautifully done. Makes me think of similar times in my own life. Keep up the good work.

I loved this poem, definitely one of your best works! I cried b/c I can relate to it. Extremely well done!

I adore this! Its just perfect. Great imagery and beauty communicated accross. Keep writing :D

So wish i could feel fate as you only can do to know and express. I am nieve too much for reading. I need more life less poetry. I feel the spiral up or down i do not know. It makes me feel...bittersweet in so grand a sense beyond the origian lmeanign that cliche would only add to the grandeur of the world and people could hear the adage of where light once was.

just beautiful...