This was a well written peice, I'm impressed. Thank You for The spelling correction on claimmed I'm gratful.

YOU MAY HAVE MENT WELL BUT THAT'S NOT MY UNDERSTANDING THAT'S NOT WHAT I GOT OUT OF IT!

"Faye Coon 2005-09-23 ch 1, signed Not so much of a poem in my opinion. This to me is more of a stream of thoughts. Not entirely bad, just not a poem."

I'm rather thrilled with this review

"Faye Coon 2005-09-23 ch 1, signed not clammed, 'claimed' and as if neccesary to say this was another shrort horrific attention cry. You want to sicken someone, dont bother killing yourself, overpower their senses with this garbage, they will certainly wish to die themselves, powerful stuff here...hehe. -Faye"

AND THIS IS NOT ME! THIS IS ABOUT COP THAT I KNEW THAT DIED PROTECTING PEOPLE. ATTENTION CRY YA RIGHT

I'M YOUR CHEER TYPE AND I ALWAYS GET ATTENTION MIGHT NOT BE GOOD ATENTION BUT IT IS ATTENTION.

"Faye Coon 2005-09-23 ch 1, signed Trash, it has such a generic proccessed feel. I can so vividly picture a thirteen year old girl dressedf in hot topic garb, posing for herself and the haunting boys in the mirror. I can feel the nausea you must feel for yourself, I can understand all those conformity induced scrathches in your wrists, and how glamorous thta noone will understand you, perhgaps that might make you soecial? Maybe if you write this crap and publish it, you might feel more important, especially when your also surrounded by mimcs like you writing the exact hollow thing that you are. The lovely husks of people bearing themselves today, these (you) are the controllers of tommorrow, oh, yes, another conformity queen!"

GOTH GROSS! IF IT'S TRASH THEN WHY BOTHER REVIEWING IT!

"Faye Coon 2005-09-23 ch 1, signed Could you stop writing all this that must have taken you at most ten minutes? You seem to be mass-manufacturing this crap by the hour, binging and perging predictably in the extra time, wouldnt want your punk skater boyfrioned to be dissapointed and start dating Emily, eh? (emily an random name...)-Faye"

I'D LIKE TO POINT OUT emily an random name 'AN' SHOULD BE 'AND' OW AND I WROTE THEM ALONG TIME AGO, IT'S NOT MY FAULT I JUST GOT E-NET BACK IN MY HOME!

By the way I'm Not goth or punk nor is my Boy-friend, I don't Like hot topic and I would never go in and I wrot those Poems 2years ago, It's fine You don't like them but please don't flame me again it angers me. I was in middle school when I wrote them and I'm now in high school, sorry I've neglected to update my profile.

AND YOU SHOULD READ SOMTHING LIKE ARIZONA NIGHT THAT I'VE WRITTEN

You need to stop judging people by the way they write not every one writes about life. Ya most of the stuff I write is horror or fantasy but those are my lines of interest.

AND I'VE NEVER BEEN FLAMED JUST TOLD NICELY THAT THEY DIDN'T LIKE IT ONCE THE WHOLE TIM IV'E WORKED AT FICTIONPRESS OR SO DESCUSSTED IN MY LIFE. I FELL SO SORRY FOR THE OTHERS YOU MAY HAVE FLAMED.

Let Me tell tell you a little about me, I'm in JROTC, Teen Court, I fund raise in a clud for poets in my school, I'm on my school Debate team and I read poems for the public, I fund raise for the March Of Dimes, I go to church and meet after for Bible study, I participate in 2 church groups at school, I like acting, singing, drawling, Science, and English, YOU DIDN'T EVEN KNOW A DAMN THING ABOUT ME BEFORE THIS AND YOU WHERE SO QUICK TO JUDGE!

(DARK FAIRIE since : 02-18-04) I'VE BEEN HERE ALMOST A YEAR LONGER THEN YOU (FEY COONsince : 12-16-04)

nice, dude. nice

Ditto, sempre. you do a wonderful job with your vocabulary!

~F

I liked this poem a lot.

...i loved this...sometimes it's hard to put great vocabulary into poetry, but you pull it off tremendously...i loved it!

...review some of my work too please!...