Interesting first chaper, funny too. Your writing style is unusual, but I like it. Keep up the good words.

AHAHAHAHAHA! Python-girl is very cool. So is the main character. There's this guy in my class named orion... everyone likes him. Seriously. Even some of the COOL people like him. While he sits around, being braindead, like usual (and INCREDIBLY naive, but he's nice, and not an **), girls swoon at his presence.

My health teacher's sister's dog's name is yoda. She kept talking about how she accidentally called her sister's boyfriend yoda. It made me laugh! I like the writing style, very different from your other stories and just as good. Keep writin'. Coolyo!

It's awesome so far!