I love it. like a lot. you have a great habit of writing amazing stories and then stopping. DON'T! I want to read more! NOW! ARRGH! *bites off arm*

Um...Update!

Hey, great chapter! I'm not really good with writing constructive criticism, or any criticism for that matter. Probably because there's nothing to criticize, yeah so anyway good luck on finals this week.

This isn't a bad story! You should continue with it.

This story is so cool!
I love dragons and wolves too!!
I wonder what happens next?
Keep on writing!!
Geckos

This is my favorite chapter so far! It sounds like something interesting is going to happen.

This is a good chapter. I'm not sure if I can add any good criticism, though. Sorry.

Hey, good chapter! I don't know how it was originally, but it's good now.

GREAT STROY YOUR STORY ON FF.NET ROCKS 2

Hey i like your style, maybe a little more description about the school, what everything looks like, more description of the people around her-just to give readers a clearer picture. we also don't have a very clear picture of Rhena, description is key (someone told me that lol) maybe you should try putting different character's thoughts and speech on seperate lines, it's a little confusing. other than that, the plot seems good, can't wait to find out what happens with the older hot guys lol, looking forward to reading more.

again you have done yourself Crimson! I am SO proud of you! *claps hands* keep up the good work! JA NE! ^__^

Once again Als did it again a true author Awesome

Very good Als i couldnt have done a better job myself true author

Great story! Write chapter two already! I love it. Write more!

Great story! I loved it! When's the next chapter coming up? I wanna see it now! PLEEASE hurry up with the next chapter, kay? Other wise I'll be nagging you till you do! And plus, sick my evil homework on you, BAAII!

Heh, heh, your EVIL TOASTER! MUWHAHAHAHA!