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darqlyte 2005-01-29 . chapter 1
Short and Sweet. :)

Well done. You used few words to convey a large meaning.

It's not how many words that matters, but what the words mean.

God Bless.

-Blaeyk Q'olhe Darqlyte

Also, thank you for your review. I speak, though, of another Brianna, however, you could replace "Brianna" with any name, really. It's what I call someone very important to me, then again, you could tell that by the poem, could you not?
mirzam nimu 2005-01-25 . chapter 1
Thirteen words, that was easy. :) But it's a good haiku - you got the number of syllables right in each line and the content is meaningful.
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