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Hazelnut-Romance 2008-03-22 ch 1,	abusedo another story like this!
cherrypiesizzle 2007-09-23 ch 1,	abuseSounds interesting...
cute on the spot 2007-04-04 ch 1,	abusehehe
cheesecake.thief 2007-02-23 ch 2,	abuse“Nope,” she said, her heart pounded as he called her sweety. “I left my heart in the freezer.” I think sweety should be sweetly xD Sorry for being over... picky.
AJS 2007-02-16 ch 38,	abuseOh wow. This story is amazing. I love the law aspect to it as well. But seriously just... wow. I guessed the Attorney DA as the father right away and I knew Veronica had been the one who was there to actually witness the murderer but WOW SHE was Joanna?! God, that is seriously just insanely... wow. Haha. Stunned me. I feel like everyone in this fic was too goddamned smart for me. Usually I have the chance to figure things out as clues are dropped but it seemed like Ginger and Lucas and everyone else just always detected the lies straight away, looking into things that I didn't even realize needed looking into. Wow, maybe that's just proof that I should give up any hopes of being a lawyer, lol. This fic though... wow, I really love it. I know I keep saying that and I probably sound like a ditz for doing so but seriously I am just... awed (: Plus, the chemistry between Lucas & Ginger is great :D He :D it makes me so happy that he survived! I was like HOLY ** THIS IS NOT HAPPENING T_T When I read that he got shot and there was no pulse. I think Lucas really was onto something when he was talking about Vana having some sort of weird powers. M I love this I love this I love this adds to favorites I wish there were more incredible fics out there like this. It really made me think - which is nice because as much as I love those all-out high school romance cliches, even I have to admit that varying the scene a bit is a nice change (: You're an amazing writer. There were a few grammatical errors, and your spelling of "Okay" as "Okey" always seemed to bug me because I would read it as okie, which just sounds plain weird, but I got over it. What's funny is that sometimes I would read Ginger's name as George... which now I think I think about it is funny because George Lucas. Okay wow ahahah I'm a dork don't mind me (: You're an excellent writer and I will definitely check out more of your works, especially if you slipped a little of Lucas & Ginger into one of your stories (: I could never mind a little more of them... or a lot more of them :D Haha. Keep up the great work! You must be insanely smart to even think of all this. This story is freaking brilliant. -- Alyssa
siddika 2007-01-20 ch 38,	abuseLOVED IT.
britty-tt 2007-01-20 ch 38,	abuseI can only imagine how much time, talent and passion it toke you to write this story. Its like a great mystery novel with romance in it 2. There are some stories you read and you think to yourself 'i should be reading this story out of a book I paid for, than on the internet for free'. Yours is defiantly one of those stories. There is so cliche what-so-ever in this story, its so utterly original. In my opinion your a good author if you can turn a cliche into your own by putting a different spin on the story, but Brilliant authors with loads of talent can come up with a totally unique plot. You are one of those authors. While I was reading this story I got a weird feeling that it was going to end up like two of the stories I've read that were really good but uterly heartbreaking at the end when the male main character dies (its always the male, never the female) and when Lucas got shoot at the end of the last chapter, my heart sank, I thought you were going to ruin your story like the authors of the other two stories by killing him off. Thank god he didnt I don't think I could cope knowing I sat here for 4 hours reading your story only to be disappointed by the crap ending. Your characteristion (don't think i spelt that right :p) is also very good, you built up Lucas and Ginger's characters, by expressing there emotions brilliantly and portraying their love for each other. Thanks for writing a great ending and never disappointing me with your brilliant piece of writing. xoxo
becxfok01 2006-04-01 ch 38,	abuseWow, i just read this story and I love it. I'm amazed that you managed to write such a story within a year -well done! And I love how the story is cliche in a not overly-cliche way. And thanks for making Ginger so smart. I love smart female characters. Keep writing!
Deafgurl's world 2006-03-13 ch 38,	abuseWow! Lucas and Ginger now make up and now together! Hooay! I hope she is safe with Lucas. Hurry update soon.
Kita Tsuki 2005-12-28 ch 38,	abuseCongratulations! This was a really good story! I'll miss Ginger and Lucas. Peace!
Katie 2005-12-16 ch 38, anon.	abuse;) Is that just me or am I detecting hints of Janet Evanovich in your writing! I absolutely loved it! :) I love how everything came together in the end. Absolutely amazing--Kudos to you!
Dannie 2005-12-16 ch 38, anon.	abuseaw... i loved the ending! I was great!
Silver-Dragon5 2005-12-15 ch 38,	abuseCongatulations on finishing your first story. I know the feeling - it's great isn't it?! It was a wonderful story and I know that your other ones will be great too. I'll have to check them out sometime. Once again, congrats and I'll catch up with your stories later. ~Silver
your personal vendetta 2005-12-15 ch 38,	abuseCLAP CLAP
MountainStream 2005-12-15 ch 38,	abusei read this all in one sitting and now its almost one o clock in the morning! I dont need to tell you anymore im sure that alone tells you this is a good story xx

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