hm...interesting...it's not quite clear what's you're refering to all the way through...but I like how it's all liquid stuff...I like "rather than solid state of us."

Awesome! I love dark poems and this one just did it in for me. Your descriptions of the poison are wicked, and sweet at the same time. Great Stuff.

N.S

It's short but really good, great job.

-smiles some more-