It's good, but it's kind of sad. I get that way sometimes too...

By God, this is awesome! It's so relatable and interesting and and and... I lost my train of thought... -stares out window for ideas-... it's so cold outside... anyway, back to the point, I really like this. Once again, my editing senses are tingling about the punctuation. Just try to be a little more consistent. It's something I learned over time (and other people's corrections)... Other than that, I love this poem... wish I could write like you! Well, gotta go, Mickey Mouse and I are taking over the world!Livin' in the SUBZERO!Tatianna Blusummers

people would care! believe me, people always care. nonetheless, great poem. I really liked it, it spoke to me, and I feel that way a lot. great job