Wow, this is a really good story.
A few grammatical/spelling errors here and there, but it's readable. (:
It's kind of funny - I have a character named Calhoun whose mother is also dead. xD;
DUH-NUH-NUH-NUH!
Anyway, you probably won't even read this review since you haven't updated the story since '05. But whatever. o=