Reviews for Know I'll Be There

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Elphie Thropp 2005-10-09 ch 1,	abuseVery touching! The rhyming is a little bit forced but its incredibly hard to rhyme a poem and not have it sound forced(that's why I prefer not rhyming). Keep it up and thanks for the review!
Charity F 2005-10-07 ch 1,	abusewoah...major rewind!! presses play button listens in rapt silence with mouth wide open WOW! That was totaly awesome!! you have some amazing talent girl! That was some pretty cool stuff!! i just LOVe this ending.. (quote)"So love with your heart and live without a care, Don't ever give up and know I’ll be there." sghs so sweet and RIGHT THERE you know? yeah... this was just so solid and yeah...i've been left speechless...keep it coming! i'm loving it!! Luv, ~Tabitha the Great~ XD
Slowly Sinking 2005-06-15 ch 1,	abuseBeautifully written, very hopeful and inspiring. I love your stuff!
Tom Madden 2005-04-03 ch 1,	abusevery inspirational
Ethereal Kisses 2005-02-12 ch 1,	abuseHeya, I'm just R + R ing like you asked! Thanks for the review you left on my poem! This is very uplifting and poetic. I love the rhyming. Although I generally don't write poems about the 'happy' side of life (the poem you reviewed was an exception, lol) I must admit that this poem did make me think - which seemed to be your intention so you succeeded! I think this poem gives good advice that should be followed. Well done! ~ Ethereal Kisses ~
nyvashorte 2005-02-08 ch 1,	abuseThis may not be the most "well rounded" review (as it says at the bottom of the Submit Review page) but your poem is VERY good. And interesting. But that's good!
fadedrainbows 2005-02-07 ch 1,	abuseThis is really nice, but the rhythm is off. It doesn't quite flow as well as it could. Counting syllables in each phrase might help. This poem is very uplifting. I can see that you were inspired by something very beautiful. It's nice that you want to help spread that inspiration. Great job. ~~Faded~~
Arutha 2005-01-31 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is definately one of your best. It flows very well; the words are well-used; and the message is awesome... maybe I should write a happy poem too oO(ponders this new idea) Any how, keep it up ;P
Im/the/ONE 2005-01-28 ch 1,	abuseIt's great I love it! You are a great writer and if wrting is either just a hobby or a passion I say you should stick with it for the rest of your life!
Passionate Singe 2005-01-28 ch 1,	abuseOMG! You reviewed one of my poems and i haven't been able to visit the site in a while, but i read you're poem and i was truly touched. It was really beautiful, and had a lesson that is usually overlooked and deemed unimportant.You have extraordinary talent and I want you to know this. Never give up on your dreams and remember: It takes a lot of hope to dream, but it takes a lot of exertion and a true believer to take that dream and turn it into a reality. Raquel Ortiz, a.k.a. Sol Ana Iliara
simpleplan13 2005-01-27 ch 1,	abusei like it... especially the ending
mizu no kokoro 2005-01-27 ch 1,	abusevery nice, i liked how you put the questions out in a non-blunt way(word or not word? O_o)Overall, great job! keep writing!!
eviljackinthebox 2005-01-26 ch 1,	abuseThat's pretty good. I have to say the rhythm is off (as I know you hate all compliments... XD) but the imagery is good, and the mother's speech thing is nice. I'm glad you're still writing... I haven't talked to you much lately. I hope you're still there. Call me if you get a chance, eh?
Michael Kim 2005-01-26 ch 1,	abuseI liked the couplets. Nice ballad poem, rhythm seems ok too. Look me up too!
AllyCred 2005-01-26 ch 1,	abusenicely done...lost the rhythmic flow near the end but got it back quickly...loved this very good and extrememly well written. lots of love ~AllyCred~

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