I like the way you write this. I hope you'll update because I'm sure I'll read it. Thank you!

I really liked how you started this. "In a time way away..." Hehe. It seems like it could be a super adorable fairy tale, and I truly enjoyed what you've got so far. Continue, continue! :P

It's a good start. I really want to see who this Prince Nathan is and how his personality is. Is Jake in love with Bella? Please update I want to see what happens next and what Bella decides. Keep up the good work.

Very interesting! Update soon! I really want to see what happens!