 ailimak90 2005-05-27 . chapter 1i like ur idea of the 'love puzzle' and it clicks with the title of ur poem 'complete me'...very creative way of thinking! =)in this poem also,u're trying to say dun rush wen it comes to love..then everything will fall into place perfectly..CUNTED PHILOSOPHY! haha...ok sorry i'm a bit giler today! but overall..good job! |
 Lobster Wedding 2005-02-28 . chapter 1aw how sweet! LOL, good job, i kno how it feels to be the missing piece, and not knowing what true love means...but that was before. GOOD JOB! |
 windowbreak 2005-02-05 . chapter 1gwah...why is it that BOYS ARE MORE PASSIONATE THAN GIRLS?!?!?! geez...even ur poems are better than mine...that's why i delete em...-_-'' lol. did u write this for sum1 or just for the fun of it?... il y a un fille oui? ^^- anyway, good job. m gna read the rest now...u ahppy?^^ |
 boy from heaven 2005-01-28 . chapter 1 wah...bagus lah..memang hebat *thumbs up* hey hafex sorry lah...kita tipu coz i dnt knw just a prank joke lah...n i tak tau u ni a serious person hey minta maaf ya? banyak sorry ya? n i dnt want kim to tell u dat i hate a fp acc...so yea kim tanya n banyak lawan in MSN..so sorry ya...Kawan? oh by the way ur poem rocks lyk **...ops maaf rocks lyk heaven! gud wrk man
peace boy from heaven~
PS hope u faham apa kita cakap ni...lol of course u do...or mayb not |
 Shadow Haven 2005-01-27 . chapter 1whoa...awesome! you're a real good poet! Better than me!...hmm...guys r so compassionate theses days...yeah..i just noticed...so...hm...hu is the person?? *nudge nudge* hafez!! u ddnt tel me hu u lyk yet! so...tell me in MSN, k?...though i neva see u in MSN nemore...hm...o well...newayz, keep it up! try and write a story! cos ur a great writer! so try a story, yah?? and tell me wen u post it! cos i'll review! |