Very interesting. I like the repetition of it, particularly in the end, how it's still repetitive but slightly different. Very good.~ Tempest Epilogue

Love your work, as always. Did you notice, if you look at the lines of your work, they almost look like waves on a sea? I think that's really cool. :D And I love the poem itself! XD Your poetry is always original...it's like a fresh sea breaze. ;) [haha...a corny joke to go with the 'siren sea' theme...ignore me. XD]

O, I like ^_^ Poemses about sirens are always good ^_^ Very spiffy, Aly-chan : ) (Sorry I'm not being more editorial-ish-thingy. I'm not very awake right now.)

I stand by what I said at lunch. This is awesome! -Hugs you.- 'We are no one, the sullen voices of the sea...' It had this awesome rhythm I absolutely love it! So no more bashing yourself, okies? =D