“the princess will be able to choose her husband.”
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“Between either Prince Andrew Roxford of Jariva or Prince Devon Pharo of Belgrane.”

So much for choices hahaha! I like that part.
Update soon :)

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i thik you called the princess saphron at the end if I am not mistaken...

Intriguing beginning, with promise of another lovely story. I do agree with Eika in that Nakirah is a wee bit stereotypical, but I am sure she will develop more with the story. Please continue.

Me again. VERY good start, but she seems to fit the typical snobbish headstrong princess mode a bit too well. Give her some other qualities, please!!