 mispel 2005-07-02 . chapter 1I knew the story of Adam and Eve was about good things happening. I like what you did with the concept. The story has such a positive spin (except for the thieving and the name-calling) and a mellow, pleasant tone. |
 Cyberknight 2005-05-14 . chapter 1Well.. add my name to the list. I thought this was a good story too. It's really clever. |
 La Velvetine 2005-02-28 . chapter 1Hahaha, this is very amusing. I like it a lot, and perhaps it is doubly entertaining since I am not Christian. Nice! |
 SparkyTheDragon 2005-02-26 . chapter 1Heheh, very nicely done! Funny stuff. If only Milton could still be alive to read it. |
 Forgotten Bird 2005-01-29 . chapter 1Excellent twist on a well known story, great job |
 Bloodflower 2005-01-29 . chapter 1LOL! Well-written, well done, me likes muchly. *grin* Very entertaining. |
 SnoDragon 2005-01-27 . chapter 1*grin* Excellent and well done! I adore new takes on old ideas. I wouldn't want to go back either, if I were them. |
 Pico the Great 2005-01-27 . chapter 1Amusing.
Good stuff.
-PTG |