*speachless* that was brilliant. Your so going onto my favorits list.

Great poem. Its message is clear and the whole thing is very well written. You could turn this into a song with ease as it has a great rythm and flow too.

-write on!

true words from a true author/poet/. the world is truly messed up... i especially liked these lines:"Hypocrisy does no deed to any man

It has the power to reach under sand

Genocide only takes away beautiful dreams

It only adds more voice to screams"well written!! i like it! i love the rhyming. well done!