whoa kiley, that was really powerful... it seemed like i was watching it like a movie. you're just that a book, kiley. seriously.

i like the format a lot.. very nciely done

oh my god kiley... god. um.. what are you talking about... it better be a metaphor. P but great job buddy.

-katherine

I loved the form the poem was in, it was very unique. The whole poem described several moments of my own life. The imagery was fantastic! I shall read more of your work...

InspiredxIllusion

p.s. R&R my poems/stories as well!