Wow, this is a very thoughtful, meaningful poem and I love it. You definitely got the message across and the repitition never got boring or annoying or repetitive.

Doumo Arigatou Gozaimasu.

~Nico

That was so sweet and gentle and adorable. Ok, enough ranting. Amazing, you have wonderful talent with words. Beautiful and insightful. ^__^

~Ash-chan~

This is an excellent work (thanks for your reviews, actually both my parents are Independent like myself). Awesome imagry and structure, keep up the great writings!

This...is...AWESOME! I'm not sure if it's supposed to be a 'love' poem, but it sure sounds like it (that's why I put it under romance...)! Anyway, love the poem!

~A.R. Twilight