I really like this. It's so effing true too.

i like it! really its a v ery empowering poem, and the rythmings great they dont seem forced at all they just add to the rythum.

Are you RATM fan? It seems like this would be something they would have done back in the day. Very well written and great use of rhyme. Great message too.

-write on!

Nothing Freah??..Well it kicks major **..thank you :)

Aye, it's neither fresh nor good in any sense. Painfully obvious rhythmic technique meets poor spelling and captivatingly bad theme.

i like!! makes you kind of think of things differently whenever i go to a city. well written!! angsty as well. great job! :)