|Reviews for Veiled Melody|
| SaveMeToo 2/7/05 . chapter 1
I'm not sure I got it all, but I luv all the parellel's you draw with your words in this one!
| thatgirl1116 1/30/05 . chapter 1
this is really fantastic. the language and vocabulary is really romantic and intoxicating.
| Mango Motercycle 1/29/05 . chapter 1
omg mallory you are soo very talented...i love the metaphors!
| simpleplan13 1/27/05 . chapter 1
This dancing is a maquerade.. masquerade
it is shakespearean and well done
| DOORphrame 1/26/05 . chapter 1
Interesting. I like the discriptive words and the idea behind it. Keep writing.