I'm not sure I got it all, but I luv all the parellel's you draw with your words in this one!

*Amber*

this is really fantastic. the language and vocabulary is really romantic and intoxicating.

omg mallory you are soo very talented...i love the metaphors!

This dancing is a maquerade.. masquerade

it is shakespearean and well done

Interesting. I like the discriptive words and the idea behind it. Keep writing.